Thursday, March 24, 2016

We have been writing stories using our creative juices. We hope you enjoy them. Please comment then we will know we are writing for an audience.

Big Boots
By Jade
Giant
Stamping
Noisy
Boots
Jack
Climbing
Beanstalk


Up in the air jack
by Harry
The beanstalk is
Getting eaten
By a giant.
The giant is
Looking for
Jack.
I am Jack.
I can see
Up.




The Beanstalk

by Jessica

Hands stretching

Legs crawling

Eyes looking

At the giant’s face

Face still

Giant still

Head looking

Left and right

Elbows straight

Bean growing

Enormous stalk

Enormous boots

Tied laces

Huge socks

Grass high

The giant

Yelled

“FE FI FO FUM !”
        

                                                                                                     



1 comment:

  1. What fantastic action words you have included in your writing! If I was Jack I would run away really fast!

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